A few readers have registered their complaints that the blog has lately been heavily focused on fiction queries and manuscripts and novels, and what about poor, neglected nonfiction? Doesn't nonfiction have feelings too? When nonfiction is pricked does it not bleed???
Apparently so.
The art of writing a nonfiction book proposal is sort of like cooking lasagna. There are a thousand ways of making it, everyone has their own recipe, but most every lasagna will have a few basic ingredients and chances are it's going to taste good in the end. The below recipe, if you will, applies to just about every kind of nonfiction, from history to self-help to narrative nonfiction.
Also, people often ask if they need to write the whole nonfiction book before they query an agent. Not so! Or at least not usually so. An agent can often sell nonfiction projects on proposal, meaning you write the proposal first, then sell the project, then write the book. It mostly depends on the quality of the idea and its marketability, your platform, and your writing ability. There are definitely exceptions to this -- it really depends on the project, and sometimes it pays to write the whole thing, especially memoir. Think of a memoir like a novel. You'll have to write the whole thing.
So without further ADO (thanks everyone), here are the basic sections of a nonfiction book proposal.
Overview
The overview is unlike anything you'll ever write. It's not quite a synopsis, it's not quite a sample chapter, it's not quite catalog copy, it's not even quite, uh, an overview. Its really the distillation of the book you're going to write. You're getting across the meat of the story that you are writing about. You're telling the story/narrative/subject in brief. You're telling the agent/editor what the book is going to be about, what it will be like and who's going to read it. It's really a sales pitch.
So to write the overview, pretend you're a broke screenwriter pitching a project to a big time Hollywood producer. You're telling the gist of the story, you're selling him on how America absolutely needs a movie about the number 23, baby! You want the producer at the end to have an idea of what the book is about so he'll scratch his chin and say, "Interesting.... Tell me more about this number 23."
A good overview will give the agent/editor a great sense of the subject, the scope, the heart, and the need for the book. It will get them excited about the project.
I know all of this is really vague, and that's because the approaches to the overview vary a whole lot depending on the project, and it's difficult for me to say that the overview is one thing or another. You have some room for creativity here, so just focus on summarizing and pitching your project while making it sound as appealing and necessary as possible.
Competing Titles/Market Analysis
This is the part where you discuss the other books that are out there as a way of convincing an agent/editor that there is a pressing need for your book. Counterintuitive, I know. The market analysis should not be along the lines of, "275,000,000 Americans drink milk, therefore my book about milk will sell 275,000,000 copies," but it should really address the market for the book and who your potential reader will be.
Also, in this section you should discuss other books that have been published on your subject. If they're close enough to yours you might list them and address them individually, assessing how each one differs from yours. This is not the time to Swift Boat other authors, but you should clearly differentiate your project from the other books that have already been published on the subject. It's not enough to try to convince an agent/editor that your book is like someone else's only better -- you have to find a genuine unexplored niche in the marketplace.
Biography
Platform platform platform. This is the part where you convince the agent/editor that you are the best person in the entire world to be writing the book. It's probably best not to lie in this section.
Outline/List of Chapters
Sometimes people include an outline or a list of chapters to give a sense of the scope of the project. Personally I feel like this part is a little overrated for something like narrative nonfiction because the finished product is probably going to change, but this section is very important for any sort of self-helpish or businessish proposal since you'll already have a pretty good idea of where the project is going and can summarize it here.
Sample Chapter(s) (1-3)
Other than perhaps the overview, the sample chapter(s) is(are) the most important part of the proposal. Some editors I know just get a gist of the overview and then turn straight to the sample chapters to see a sample of the author's writing. So work very, very hard on these chapters to make them as good as possible.
Other
Other things that you might consider throwing in I mean including are copies of newspaper/magazine articles you wrote that apply to the subject (if the book is arising out of a published article), reviews of past nonfiction books you've published (not self-published), and anything else that will help convince the agent/editor that you're super-awesome.
And that's pretty much it! Easy as lasagna.
Thursday, February 15, 2007
How to Write a Nonfiction Book Proposal
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28 comments:
I knew there was a reason I wrote fiction.
Well, other than all that pesky research and such.
I agree with Jen. With non-fic it seems that the ability to write the book comes a distant third to the author's marketability and platform.
With fiction it's mostly about the book, and as a nobody I couldn't be happier with that situation.
Nathan, thanks again for your delightful blog! How hard and fast a rule is it that memoirs always have to be finished? An agent recently requested my proposal for a book that was previously agented, but then we were calling it more of a "how-to" of sorts. Now, I'm calling it a memoir, but it will still have essays on the subject matter in general. A little of both, I guess. I'm hoping the agent will be able to sell the proposal as it is, since it's not your typical memoir, and is quite unusual. What do you think? thanks, G.R.
Green Ray,
It's tough to say without seeing the proposal itself (it's part how-to part memoir part essay collection?), but I'd say in general if it's not a very clearly marketable high concept idea you're probably going to have to write the whole thing. You may find an agent with a proposal, but to find a publisher chances are you'll have to write the whole thing. But again, without seeing the proposal I'm not positive.
Thanks, Nathan. You're fast! I guess I'll have to wait and see what the agent says. I've done so much work on my novels without yet selling them, so it would be great to get paid before finishing this one! Maybe if we remove the word "memoir," as my new subtitle is very alluring, but I don't want to reveal it here. Thanks again.
Hi Nathan,
Thanks for this informative post!
Can you tell me how much of these rules apply to humorous non-fiction, say of the kind written by Michael Moore and spoofs like 'I moved your cheese!'?
For humorous non-fiction, would it make more sense to write the book first? Would be nice to get your thoughts on this. Thanks!
This information will come in handy for me. My sister has been harping on me to write a book about our family. Then again, the story is so weird it might work better as fiction.
gm-
For humorous nonfiction, especially debut humorous nonfiction, it's probably best to treat like a memoir and write the whole thing. But like everything else, it depends a lot on the project.
I'm printing this out and using it as a reference ASAP. I'm writing my proposal now for my copywriting book that I asked you about in the AbsoluteWrite.com forum.
Your manuscript formatting post will also be so helpful. Every book I buy tells me something different, so it's nice to have an agent give his perspective. Thank you.
By the way, your blog is fantastic! I just started my own web site, which includes a blog, based on your recommendations to establish a web presence. It's been a lot of fun putting it together, and I can't wait to build it into a useful tool.
Thanks so much, Susan! Good luck with the proposal!
I assume that platform is all about the author's ability to promote the book. Since commercial publishers are in business to make money, why isn't there the same emphasis on platform for fiction and memoirs? Wouldn't a novel by George Bush, even if it's awful, be likely to sell better than a novel by George Nobody?
Thanks.
Non-fic = information in book form. If people want that info, you have a sale. (Even if the info is 'what Ms Hilton keeps in her handbag'.) You can advertise to the intended audience and many will buy.
Fiction = entertainment. There are untold millions of novels out there, so why do people need yours? They usually don't, until other people they know and trust tell them how good it is. With fiction, advertising can only get the ball rolling - in the end, it's all about the book.
Hi Nathan. I came across your blog while searching literary agents on a lazy Sunday afternoon. Your site has been the most informative, enjoyable and honest that I have found so far. Thank you for sharing so much helpful information.
Guidelines? Who needs guidelines. Agents love it better when you show how creative you are by inventing new submission methods/combinations that they've never heard of.
Hi Nathan,
When writing a non-fiction book proposal,under the outline/list chapters section, should I include an outline of a preface or just the chapters?
Thanks for your help
Yes, if it's relevant to what is to come later, you might give a brief sketch of your preface as well.
Nathan how can you tell what to consider a book that although it is based on real life situations and contains many elements of self-reflection and self help is put together as in a story using fictional charaters? The information offered is real but the characters are fictional and represent archetypes found within each person (such as Herne, the Hermit, etc.)
I must agree with anonymous. You really have an incredibly blog. It's fun, engaging, but incredibly thorough and informative.
Thanks!
My View:
Start with the story.
This one got me a good response: many requests for the full manuscript. And I contract arrived overnight from a publisher
It’s the 1970s.
A group of hippies climb into rubber boats and head out to sea to face explosive head harpoons. They have whales to save. And they have faith.
The whalers have steel ships, spotter aircraft, sonar, radar and working radios. They have high paying jobs. And they have the law on their side.
http://thelastwhale.blogspot.com
So my question is, is it ever refreshing to get a submission from someone who has absolutely no clue as to how this whole process works, and so submits something unlike anything you recommend here? I mean, don't all these monochromatic electronic emails get boring, or would anything else be so unprofessional and banal that you would scoff aloud upon opening? Just wondering as someone who has NO idea how this whole process works and hoping that beginner's ignorance can somehow come across as innocent and cute instead of trite and uninformed (or do I need to do alot more reading???).
camie jo-
No, not really. Someone who doesn't know what they're doing comes across as someone who hasn't done their research.
I figured as much. Good thing I didn't submit my entire proposal in rhyme...
Cheers
And thanks for the quick response.
Nathan-
New post on an older thread here. Perhaps this is a stupid question, but should a writer have the n/f proposal ready-to-go before querying the agent?
-Cam
cam-
Yes.
So my question is, is it ever refreshing to get a submission from someone who has absolutely no clue as to how this whole process works, and so submits something unlike anything you recommend here? I mean, don't all these monochromatic electronic emails get boring, or would anything else be so unprofessional and banal that you would scoff aloud upon opening?
Well you have been told Camie Jo. A Sense of humour and self depreciation is not something that the publishing industry indulges in en masse. They would have to come out of the own rears for that. Touche.
I know you get a lot of these, but is my overview too long?
“I wish my eyes had not been opened” are the words from a hymn written by Carol Etzler. “To see all of the cruel things that we do to God's children.” These words are echoed by all of the whistle blowers who dared to take on the American political machine. I wish MY eyes had not been opened because I was forced to do something! My life as a whistle blower began in a beautiful, gracious and picturesque historic town which melds the forces of good and evil like the broken images of a kaleidoscope. When my vision cleared, the world I knew would be forever changed.
A young black girl from a modest broken home was an unlikely candidate for the second most powerful position in a southern and traditional city that was the scene of a race riot only a hundred years earlier that destroyed the lives of many successful blacks. But doting grandparents, a solid Roman Catholic upbringing, and a strong and loving mother provided the incubator that created a strong, independent, compassionate, and outspoken woman who refused to turn a blind eye to evil and injustice. After earning a college education and escaping two broken marriages, I returned to my roots with plans to help the folks in my hometown of Wilmington, North Carolina experience the American dreams of peace, prosperity, and happiness.
But whistle blowers are never prepared for the ramifications of going public with government secrets, political corruption, police brutality, and most of all, stories of pedophiles in three-piece suits and priestly garb. Sadly, all of the events in the book were exposed and reported in the media with only tepid coverage.
Much has been written on all of those subjects, but “Wish” is the first book that issues a chronology of events of the personal strife suffered by a whistle blower, stories of the lives of other whistle blowers, and the governmental agencies quietly empowered to wreak havoc on the lives of people whose revelations could mean jail time and the end to many prominent public careers.
“Wish” is two hundred spellbinding pages that reveal the rise and fall of the author and many others who dared to go public .The story is riveting as it replays briefly the author’s rags to riches story and the last fourteen tumultuous years that resulted in a return to “rags.” The book is based on over thirty years in the political arena from the campaign chairman of a hotly contested US Senate race to twelve years as the Mayor Pro Tem in Wilmington, North Carolina.
My life reminds me of the film, Enemy of the State, which is a film that was released in 1998 starring the actor Will Smith. Billed as a thriller, it is the story of a young successful lawyer whose life was thrust into turmoil when he stumbled upon information that could implicate some high-level government officials. The story could have been ripped from the pages of the author’s life. I wandered blindly into a system plagued with political corruption, police misconduct, and child sexual abuse. I watched in dismay as Council members misused millions of dollars of federal block grant money with schemes that would make Jesse James blush. I was horrified when I learned of the problems plaguing the police department. With six chiefs in eight years, the department was awash with allegations of police brutality, sexual misconduct, rape, drug abuse and cover-ups. I Wish That My Eyes Had Not Been Opened describes briefly my life before politics and details my journey and survival in a world of unspeakable evils.
Wilmington, North Carolina is the personification of gracious living, southern hospitality, gentility, and charm. It stands like a grandiose sovereignty on the banks of the Cape Fear River and is recognized as the "City of a million azaleas” and the Hollywood of the East. Wilmington is the home to Screen Gems Studio and the fastest growing university in the South. It is the vacation destination of millions who come to bask in the sun on the dazzling shores of the Atlantic Ocean and to take a trip back in time as they stroll the brick streets of the old historic district beautifully restored to resemble America’s Colonial Era. Wilmington reigns as the economic and cultural heart of southeastern North Carolina.
I am proud to say that my roots in this splendid city were planted two hundred and fifty years ago... Aside from my African American lineage, my mixed heritage encompasses all of the cultural and racial complexities of the "Old South." Fair skin, auburn hair, and hazel eyes pay homage to my Native American great grandmother, my English great-great grandfathers, and one whose descendants served in the North Carolina Senate beginning in the 1800 and whose palatial home is now an historic landmark in Wilmington. The other was a wealthy landowner whose name still adorns the major thoroughfare to the North Carolina State Port in Wilmington. The cultural complexity of my genealogy includes a Jewish great great grandfather from a Muslim state. The history of this city flows through my veins as surely as the blood of my ancestors who lived and died there...
Like my ancestors before me, I blossomed in Wilmington. As a young businesswoman, I was intricately involved in the community, serving on many boards and commissions that included state appointments, Chairman of the New Hanover County Human Relations Commission, Second Vice President of the Greater Wilmington Chamber of Commerce, Board of Trustees of the University of North Carolina Public Television, Board of Trustees of the University of North Carolina at Wilmington .She entertained dignitaries and celebrities in her home including the Governor, the Lieutenant Governor, State Senators, and Congressmen. A successful business was established that was nationally recognized in USA Today and Good Housekeeping. I was also a guest on Good Morning America, the Sally Jesse Raphael Show, and the Faith Daniels Show. And like a "Pop Princess" with a disastrous marriage, I graced the pages of Star Magazine. With a background as a speech and theater teacher, I traveled the country speaking as an advocate for women's issues and small businesses. The most extraordinary opportunities occurred when I gave the keynote address at the US Small Business Administration’s National Convention in Washington, DC and filmed the SBA’s national public service announcement.
After years of volunteering in the community, I fill an unexpired term on the Wilmington City Council and was re-elected three times in at-large elections by the citizens of the City and elected Mayor Pro Tem five times by my fellow council members spanning a decade. I often remarked, “I am home.”
But even in the "Garden of Eden," knowledge becomes a burden. Wilmington is also home to the 2nd highest crime rate in the state of North Carolina and remains on the FBI's list of high crime areas. Drugs flow freely as the Sheriff’s Department and the Police Department squabble over territory. Wilmington is the home to a Sheriff that traveled to Florida to confiscate drug money that he said belonged to a local attorney who defended the drug dealer. The Sheriff’s office also has the distinction of four deaths in four years, including an eighteen- year old college student who was shot through his wooden front door as a seven-member swat team went to question him about the theft of a play station. And among the six police chiefs hired in the last eight years at the police department, three were ineffective as they were mired in the three B’s: Boys, Babes, and Booze. One chief, Bob Wadman, was the subject of a book written by former Nebraska state senator, John W. DeCamp, entitled “The FranklinCover-Up which accuses the chief of numerous crimes against children. During Mr. Wadman’s tenure chaos reigned supreme amid allegations of intimidation, harassment, death threats, and sexual exploitation that sparked the birth of a very perverted police underground newspaper.
The latest departing chief left a memo with the following quotes: “I would describe the PD current status as coming apart at the seams," and referring to a fellow officer, “I would recommend he be moved to professional standards for his own protection.” The officer who needed protection was jokingly referred to as "Mr.Clean.”
As a councilmember for fourteen years, I fought the system of corruption, racism, lawlessness, police brutality, pedophilia, and illegal drug traffic and in frustration, wrote and self-published a book entitled, Under Oath: Memoirs of an Honest Politician, where I “spilled the beans.”
But I was not prepared for the events that followed the publishing of the book. I would soon learn that these criminals would resort to any means necessary to remain anonymous, including, harassment, intimidation, and character assassination and they were connected from the Court House to the White House. They destroyed anyone who dared to challenge them. I dared!
I have felt the sting of pain, grief, disappointments, racism, poverty and hunger; but nothing in life prepared me for the fourteen years that I served on the City Council in Wilmington, North Carolina. “I Wish My Eyes Had Not Been Opened.” There was no way to fathom what would lie ahead and how often her faith would be challenged. “Wish” offers a view of the life of a government whistle blower who has lived fourteen years in the dark and dangerous world of political corruption, pedophiles, and police brutality stalked by a government agency that few in the public are aware. Years of research produce a vivid profile of the operations of this agency also referred to by journalist, Bill Moyers, as the “secret government.”
Readers will enjoy a beautiful and descriptive story of a young girl growing up in rural North Carolina. They will be intrigued, fascinated and outraged at the stories of corruption and misuse of the millions of tax dollars used to stalk, harass, and intimidate government whistle blowers.
Sorry about error. Her faith should read my faith.
Hi Nathan-
Are you an agent who wants sample chapters and a table of contents with the query for nonfiction up front all at once? Or do you only want the query part of the proposal first?
Thanks,
Shannon
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